I have a one question for you. Is Area 51 Athing in your universe? Because I want the jokes about Area 51.
Oh I think Lloyd makes the joke about. Oh, charlie has probably kept all the aliens in area fifty one or something like that
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I'll just be reading the whole story and I'm at chapter 4, and I think it's really f****** funny. Kay Gaia thinks that Charles is gonna die at 60 or die. In this decade, britanning, medical technology is ridiculous. That man's gonna live to a 150 because he's the bloody emperor he is the best doctors, the best cooksThat man's gonna live for a long time if he doesn't go through Ragnarok. Or luche doesn't kill him or marybell in the decade, if you didn't have all those three problems, the guy all lived for a very long time.
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"Very little, unfortunately. Toudoh got out as soon as he saw the writing on the wall, presumably not wanting to risk getting mind controlled into charging the Viceroy's Palace while naked and armed with nothing but a toothpick.
Hilarious, that's really hilarious. Good one, really good one.
Ah, someone has to commission a fan art of that.
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I really wish in a future chapter or side story of c c telling marianne about the alien problem that's happening in japan and I'd love to see marianne's reaction, and then her going to tell charles about it, and then his reaction i bet it's gonna be funny.
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I have an idea for stopgap Measure to protect nightmares against the alien weapons. They should use nightmare Shields like the ones. The night police use.
Idea for cornelia
So the idea is they shoot the shield and the shield gets destroyed. That means they can survive at least one shot of the alien weapon
the basic principle is spaced armor, so shoots the shield. This destroyed the shield, but that means at least the nightmare survived one blast, of the alien weapon.
The idea may be not workout, for Cornelia. In this story, but it's an idea that she could try out if it fails, it fails, if it doesn't fail well, at least nightmare survive longer
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So I just reread chapter five, and this whole idea is useless oops
An alien blast just went through, like multiple trees and then hit the nightmare and killed Kewell's.
Oh I feel bad for his sister. At least he died in glorious combat.
Like any night should.
i really feel bad for his sister like I like her as a character. Oh, this is gonna be hard on her. At least he died in combat, right protecting his country against
Not known right now, but in the future, the aliens try and take over our home world of opplantea, Earth Tara.
And then multiple other names our home world has been named over the centuries
I hope in the future there is a side story where we see marika sourcee gets to the news that her brother died in combat, it'd be very sad. Oh side story, showing the los and tragedy of this war.
And the story has been happy and like very energetic, but it needs that sad moment.I think a side story could be good for it
like a guy walks up to her. Gives her letter. It says my condolences opens the letter up and she starts bawling her eyes out.
and then the funeral, it's a close casket funeral, cause they couldn't get the body. Oh god, that's so f****** sad and so Messed up oh.
They give the gun salute I start playing music and they start loid in the casket and then the mom starts freaking crying.
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Chapter four chamaki, the b***** jumping in grabbing his hand and killing the alien with his bloody hand and then beforehand before that, taking his hand running forward and shooting the alien all b*****
I can't wait for other characters like ogi and other characters get those b***** moments like tamaki.
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Well, I hope Lelouchhas a good therapist for the black knights
because holy s*** dead people in tanks a guy screaming for his life Well, his body is opened up. Yeah, that's some nightmare field. Things to see, i'm gonna be a really good therapist, like really good therapy for that.
Like Lelouch needs to Geass therapist, just for himself. I think.
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Oh, my God Lelouch leg's must be God damn hurting. Cause all this running 'cause Lelouch is not the most athletic person around that all that running he's doing in chapter four, gotta be andredolin and that's it
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So chapter five
It felt like transformers won and all the good scenes from it, like it felt right out of it, like
The whole scene where the air force gets the communications thing. It says, launch fighters, if this was a movieI i think the scene would look like like this
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You know how narita looks like green with trees and luscious land yeah, soon as 0 gets there and sees it. It looks like no man's land in World War 1. Just dirt and blood and just bodies on the floor body parts everywhere an artillery round holes everywhere. Blood It just looks like no man's land from World War I. That's how naria looks like when zero gets there.That's how my brain sees it
It looks like hell, just like world war One trench warfare was like.
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You know, interestingly, you did basically the same scenario, but with Cornelia, not
Euphemia, it's cool. I can see the parallels of the event.Cornelia had to put go trust in the 0 to save Euphemia. And now euphemia has to give trust 0, to save cornelia.Huh I like the parallels
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Hey, there's this thing I see you do when the Lucia's speaking as 0, you say it's Lelouch. Speaking, it's weird because it's 0. The character, the mental mindsets, talking, it's zero, not luche
"The JLF have sold themselves to another outside power, one that stands opposed to both of our interests. We have little time to explain, but suffice to say that this battle's outcome will be crucial if any of us wish to live out the year." Lelouch declares.
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"The JLF have sold themselves to another outside power, one that stands opposed to both of our interests. We have little time to explain, but suffice to say that this battle's outcome will be crucial if any of us wish to live out the year." Zero declares.
Or is it that in this scene? It's Lelouch talking to Euphemia, not 0 talking to Euphemia. You get what i'm saying.
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The Purists.
Of course it had to be the fucking Purists, Lelouch sighs.
This gave me a chuckle
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View: https://youtu.be/12B9Ua-vzi4?si=_OfNL5VQq7_sgQRU
You know, personally, I think most of the soldiers that survive this battle.Think what exactly what the black guy says " oh man you seen this shit"
Even when I'm reading this story. I hear this music from that video it's so good.
Who question do the britannians in your world? Have a ten whart hog, please hopefully they do
If they do cornelia, needs to get them now in area 11 now.
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Ah, snipers,
you know, that reminded me of Kallen stockfeld countess of New York. There was a whole thing where Marianne hated Snipers, so much ouch, She wrote a book called fucksnipers.
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You know, the whole speech were don't die? Cornelia and all that's going on, that's gonna be the d*** history books like that's gonna be done in movies when they win the war against the aliens like movies are gonna have that scene where Cornelia has like. Yeah, save me in the battle up. Explosions, is everything is going on, right? And then the the a t v s come in and then euphemia, starts talking to cornelia, that whole scene, there is gonna be in so many g****** movies in history, books and documentaries in universe.
And I bet all the nightmares have black boxes, so everything cornelia says out loud or says inside, or it's problem recorded on the black box on her nightmare. All the cameras, all the sensor data. You would prop a camera inside the cockpit.They're going to have so much information for history, books and movies
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"Ugh, with all this soot in the air, we'll really be Black Knights by the time all this is over!" Tamaki jokes as the Black Knights move up through the forest.
Another hilarious joke
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You definitely got the the whole no man's land feeling of the battle.
That World war One feeling
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"Kururugi, is that you?" He replies.
"I-I... Y-Yes-" That alone was confirmation enough. What was with people showing up in unexpected places today?! Was he going to find Shirley at the top of the hill in a JLF uniform next?
That'd be a funny if that ever happens, i've never seen that in a fan fiction, but I would love to see that.
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I think you write a little too racist like he never makes racial remarks about Colin when she's fighting her in the red nightmare like, personally, I don't think Jeremiah's a racist person like I think he just went with the memo and just became part of the purest faction, because his literal. Political and like. We're so screwed after marianne's death.The only way to get back some political powers to join the s***** purest faction.
Because you know, Marianne was whelp a commoner that make sure the enemy of the purest faction. So the only way Jerry joined that faction was to save his political career. He probably hates it, but like his lady would understand probably tells himself
And probably he needs the money for his sister too, so so his lady would understand.
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You know, Sutherland's main gun. They usually use has 2 modes on it. A canon mode and a machine gun mode.
And maybe the machine gun mode will work a lot better against the drones, but they're made of alien material so they won't hires much as the main canon firing, but they can fire up more cover fire.
The cannon will do more damage the machine, going to hit more.
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You know, it'd be funny if the Pierce faction became the pro. Japanese faction just because their outlook on life and stuff and they're just happy. And glad and?
That the Lancelot a.k.a. suzaku, saved them. We'll keep them alive, and they're grateful for it. Some of those people in the Pierce faction probably got knew Outlook on life because of this battle.
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Well, the battle of narita is basically a mass Caz of epic proportions like holy s***
A mass casualty situation aka mascal
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i will say this in on again and again. Dutch chapter 5 battle, it's one of the greatest cogios fan fiction battles that I've ever seen. It's in the my top 10 no top 5 best battles. I've ever seen a fan fiction writer has ever written. I have read this part of the story this way. Giant battle that is three hours to read and I have red it 4 times so I'm going to say it again and again, this is a really good battle. I could feel like the just it. It felt the cool like the character, the feeling, the atmosphere. It all felt right. It was done so well.One of the best battles i've ever seen in code gia's fan fiction.
